Monday 1 December 2014

Narrative

General Pitch:

The world is being threatened by technological collapse and girl A is the only one who can save it (because she's from a parallel universe where this has already happened) but she needs girl B's help. 

Outline of Opening:

  • Two girls
o   One rich (Girl A) - Big house, family, bed (Clara)
o   One poor (Girl B) - Living on the street, well-worn clothes (Yasmina)
  • Show the morning routine of each girl
o   A - Gets up, gets dressed, breakfast, brushes teeth, says goodbye to mum, leaves (presumably to got to school; backpack) 
o   B - Wakes in sleeping bag, park, pickpockets a wallet, doesn’t change her clothes, wanders (Clapham Common)
o   Both are wearing same necklace?
  • Parallel shots of them walking down very different streets (rich vs poor), end up on the same street (Stockwell houses vs Estate)
  • Come out on opposite sides of road (Lover's Walk, College Road)
  • A stops and then follows the other
  •  A looks at B from across the street, taking pictures of her while B's looking in shop window (Blinking = camera?) (Urban street; Clapham High Street/Lordship Lane)
  • B notices A in reflection, looks around, walks away slowly then ducks into an alley (Central London)
  • B starts to run away with A chasing her
  • B manages to evade and get behind A, then backs her into a corner
  • A explains her purpose with effective one-liner

     AF & DY

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